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I Need You By: demonchild13 on 10/8/2006; 1:11 AM If I hold you tight Promise me you won't slip away Please hold on with all your might So you will see the rest of the day Please stay strong! I don't want to lose you Please hold on I don't know what I'll do If I lose you How will I live? I need you to tell me what to do I know you're tired And want to rest But I still need you! Because when it comes to friends you're the best I know you have to go So I need let you go Please remember me Because I'll never forget you You'll always have a special place in my heart And somehow though you'll soon be gone I can hear your voice encouraging me on And because of this I'll be able to have a new start You’re gone now and I wish I could see your smile one last time But my one small blessing is I finally got to see your eyes shine Your eyes had been so empty and cold But just before you slipped away they were full of life once more Note: This is really horrible but it came to me while I was writing my current story and I just had to put it on paper. Please tell me what you think!
RE: I Need You By: Angel Marie Black on 11/13/2006; 10:30 PM I think this poem is beautiful. It really took my breathe away.
Re: I Need You By: Mark Morgan on 11/13/2006; 10:51 PM Yeah, even though demonchild didn't think much of it, it really hit home to me, too. Seems to be the time of year to miss lost friends. On 11/13/06,
Angel Marie Black <anon0606.Dreamzone-Redux@free-conversant.com> wrote: [Talkback about Poetry: I Need You by demonchild13] -- ---Mark "Too bad dark languages....rarely survive."
RE: I Need You By: That one kid you know on 12/14/2006; 11:59 PM omg!! i luv it...and you think you cant write poems HAH i laff lol...
RE: I Need You By: Angel Marie Black on 1/30/2007; 10:36 PM This seems a little familiar............. Is this who I think it is?????????
RE: I Need You By: demonchild13 on 2/2/2007; 12:29 AM Sorry??? What do you mean, I'm a bit confused....
RE: I Need You By: Angel Marie Black on 2/2/2007; 8:38 PM If you are confussed, then you are not who I think you are, I am sorry
RE: I Need You By: demonchild13 on 2/3/2007; 1:03 AM It's okay, sorry I wasn't who you thought I was. Who did you think I was?
RE: I Need You By: Angel Marie Black on 2/5/2007; 10:55 PM Never Mind, it's not important. Thank you for all the nice things you have said about my poetry.
RE: I Need You By: demonchild13 on 2/6/2007; 9:47 PM You're welcome; you totally deserve it. You're an awesome poet.
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