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I'm Sorry By: Richard Davidson on 1/15/2005; 12:49 AM I'm sorry you don't like me But you're stupid I'm sorry I don't fit your mold But you're a moron I'm sorry you're stupid But I'm lying It makes me feel smug and superior And wonder if you'll catch a disease Or go surfing I wonder if the people who read poetry Get confused when the hard parts come Like the notion of sand in a blender While you swirl in my mind with little bits of chocolate And an analogy of wind I'm sorry you don't like me But I like you I like you for your empty head And fancy car I like you for the money you give me When you're not looking I hope you're happy God knows I am
RE: I'm Sorry By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 1/27/2005; 9:19 AM "I wonder if the people who read poetry Get confused when the hard parts come Like the notion of sand in a blender While you swirl in my mind with little bits of chocolate" Richard, youre great....
RE: I'm Sorry By: Ben C on 1/29/2005; 10:34 PM nope, not confused but well taken, sir (y)
RE: I'm Sorry By: Mark Morgan on 1/29/2005; 11:54 PM Dude, you wonder why I never give any damn feedback to poems? Every part is the hard part. For this poem alone I'm going to make this site better. Okay, this one and this other one, which made me smile and made me feel dirty all at once. Fortunately, I drink tea.
RE: I'm Sorry By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 1/30/2005; 2:34 PM Hahah. How about this? Butter Butter cold Butter held Butter melted Butter lost (kidding)
RE: I'm Sorry By: Ben C on 1/30/2005; 3:00 PM pretty awesome dood
RE: I'm Sorry By: Richard Davidson on 2/7/2005; 10:23 PM Wow! Back on 07/10/2003 I said this about Chie: But what I've honestly come to cherish about your work, and why I put you a good bit above most writers, including myself, is your intense dedication to being succint. The only thing better than good words is the absence of unnecessary words, and God knows, you push minimalism like Elvis's doctor pushed barbituates. That's a great review. I should be a critic, instead of a vershluggen Poet.
RE: I'm Sorry By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 2/11/2005; 8:08 PM Hahah *hug*
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