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Dear Sir
By: Ben C on 5/8/2004; 10:00 AM

Saw two robins going for a walk today
Closed one eye cause all I see is a movie anyway
I’ve grown quieter as my age grows more diverse
But have a heart dear sir; life’s just a part of our universe

When I’m dead
When you’re dead
When the earth has been dead for quite some time
Stars might still be glowing
And Gases colliding with a sigh
Science might be plotting, can you deny?
To bring us back
For our second try
Oh, my second try

That’s the only way I can make sense of the mistakes that I’ve made
My second chance
Oh to look back

An experimental ray
Hit me in the heart with the suggestion
There’s more to this than
Great minds loving greatness
So write letters to those who love you
Explore everything while you’re young enough to change your mind

Ever wondered why (ever been grasped by?)
You didn’t stop walking away that day (the feeling to go far away?)
Take all your money and leave
See if someone cares enough
Take your bicycle and be yourself



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RE: Dear Sir
By: Gene Santos on 5/9/2004; 11:14 PM

Repentance,Ben?

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RE: Dear Sir
By: Ben C on 5/11/2004; 10:20 PM

Gene

None of the replies you direct toward me make the least bit of sense in terms of constructive criticism or encouragement or advice in general.

Please adjust your common sense regulator. (And help me out here!, jesus christo)

Ben

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RE: Dear Sir
By: Gene Santos on 5/12/2004; 9:02 AM

It is not my intention to make "sense"...That would make my stand trivial...I interpreted your work as a matter of ultimate concern...Need I say more...Oh,constructive criticism-very methodical...Unbound,Ben...

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