voices logo top'obeisances before the written word'
spvoices logo bottomWritings  Discussion Authors Help Search Home
You are here: Home >> Discussion Group >> Writings and Talkbacks >> Your breath with mine

Discussion Group

Your breath with mine

< < American Death Toll In Iraq Passes 500 Awash > >


Your breath with mine
By: McCarthy on 1/21/2004; 11:47 PM

An open mouth where teeth and lips don't quite meet.

All that is real the suck of your breath with mine.

And my head knocks back in stillness frozen

your breath with mine.

Reply | Bookmark this post
Enclosures: None.

RE: Your breath with mine
By: Richard Davidson on 1/31/2004; 12:19 AM

There's a simple beauty to that.



Reply | Bookmark this post
Enclosures: None.

RE: Your breath with mine
By: McCarthy on 2/5/2004; 8:52 PM

Thank you, Richard. It was a beautiful moment.

Reply | Bookmark this post
Enclosures: None.


E-mail address


Password



< < American Death Toll In Iraq Passes 500 Awash > >
 Login
Email address:
Password:
 
 Toolbox
 

top

Copyright Notice | Privacy Policy | Contact
Site Managed with Conversant