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Sorrow Sunday By: Gene Santos on 7/12/2003; 9:22 PM the gloomy sun has awaken and so am i,,,feeling down with the thought that you're not here beside me... i got up,to make some coffee a lighter,and a cigar on one hand sat in a chair,to see the morning view the greatest view,but without you... i was not fascinated,,,no longer... all i could see blood,and the sky that bleeds for me and the slow fire on my cigarette tip and a feeling of falter inside me... ,,,the soul's a lie...you said...or so i thought,,, my cup,is empty now,and i have been since you left me... the slow fire is burning down,with red eyes i could see...
RE: Sorrow Sunday By: Kari B on 9/28/2003; 12:47 PM hey, i thought that this was really good... i cant write myself but i like to read other peoples poetry to see if anyone actually feels the way i do. well this one kinda applies to me. well thankz for writing such a wonderful poem. im sure many have enjoyed your tallent.
RE: Sorrow Sunday By: Gene Santos on 10/3/2003; 8:59 AM thanks kari b...(",)
RE: Sorrow Sunday By: Ben C on 10/7/2003; 9:45 PM i'd agree, saying that this is some of your better work, its got some life to it.
RE: Sorrow Sunday By: Gene Santos on 10/8/2003; 8:59 AM woah...ben...sheesh...are you okay? i mean,this is the first time...thanks man!(",)
RE: Sorrow Sunday By: R.A.B. on 10/8/2003; 11:37 AM heh get used to ben's out of the blue remark...when he says he likes it he likes it man.
RE: Sorrow Sunday By: David Loredo on 10/18/2003; 9:56 PM coffe on a sunday ,morning red-eyes. you had a hang over when u wrote that? If you did,well it doesnt show.
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