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Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)

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Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)
By: Carlo de los Santos on 7/11/2003; 11:30 AM

When the darkened skies, Brings forth sight
While lying in my bed, thoughts of you
run through my head as
each moment passes

Memories jump from my thoughts
as the projector unreels the film of life
then turned my surroundings to clear white
and sets the time motionless---


Resemblance emerged


Your haloed smile I can’t forget
while having this never ending conversation

I close my eyes…
Listen to the echo I faintly remember

Silence starts to scream---


And only my thoughts I hear
for no apparent logical reason
thoughts that in no way I considered
a friendship I never expected would take place


From the best we possibly be,


Neither fork nor knife
splitting path and edge
Would never be reason
To hinder our happiness


For this path is not capable of disappearance!!!
It would not let us fall from where we are right now...




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RE: Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)
By: Carlo de los Santos on 7/11/2003; 11:43 AM

whew...can you help me do some colors on this poem? i think it's too shallow...anyways...any news R.A.B and Andrew? ummm ferda boys your old section got this yahoo groups...here it is http://groups.yahoo.com/group/madness_ensue and R.A.B and Daryll i need your e-mail add. cam you send a mail at thr33@saintly.com its my e-add...Sorry guys but i need to post this stuff coz i can't find your contact numbers!!!...=)

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RE: Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)
By: R.A.B. on 7/11/2003; 11:26 PM

it's rbenusa@yahoo.com

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RE: Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)
By: Andrew Guerrero on 7/17/2003; 5:51 PM

Hmmm... Have your tried to get a career option instead? Just kidding. Well, I kinda like that fork and knife thing for a start.

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RE: Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)
By: Carlo de los Santos on 7/18/2003; 8:52 AM

still with suicidal tendencies??

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RE: Do i view this same as yours? (a poem to a bestfriend)
By: Sharon Marlene Murphy on 3/13/2008; 11:15 AM

these words passed my heart, touched my soul, i totally relate.

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