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And The Heavens Stared Back

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And The Heavens Stared Back
By: Andrew Guerrero on 6/19/2003; 4:19 PM

Orbs of four-quarter lights above they spread
hung by four stream lines of coil.
It shone but shine it faintly does,
this I saw after work's rewarded toil.


Each overlap in the dimming vastness
Where no other beam can be seen
Except the firmament completing near.
This I witnessed while gladly leaned.


And as I leaned my day worn back,
The winds shifted under the neon sign.
My visions permitted the gust's request
and there was the girl and sky entwined.


Her gaze was stern and long
up in the swarthy hue of sapphire.
And her neck, granted to the last bone
I, for one felt most great dire.


But on her face seemed some shimmer
bodies gleaned in marvel and glisten.
Those shut, torpid lips hid all awe
will gape if one will quietly listen.


And she kept on with no such haste
the stars I soon slowly lost track.
For I was eager to rest my pain.
For her the heavens still stared back.




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RE: And The Heavens Stared Back
By: Gene Santos on 6/28/2003; 8:44 PM

wow...rock..."ASTIG!"(",)

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RE: And The Heavens Stared Back
By: Andrew Guerrero on 6/30/2003; 4:07 PM

Thanks. And for those people who do not know what ASTIG is, ASTIG is like saying "cool" or "maniaclly bouncing with zeal".

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