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The Ray-Shelled Queen By: Andrew Guerrero on 5/27/2003; 3:11 PM She poses the threat which none expected. Vacantly, the crown of which upturned smiles; the scepter she bear said of the portent of promise. She sleeps unaware. The life she once lived, now rest open. She wonders the others with the coolest flair. Wouldnt you like to know? Yet you spend your time knowing. Tireless tirade of lonely self-worry you strike, from the person you dont know please stop. Every tenderness turned descending. Lamentation bowed to hate. These things I find whim and wit help me hard to find her wait.
RE: The Ray-Shelled Queen By: Andrew Guerrero on 5/27/2003; 3:16 PM Once again, the inane play of words that I call brainstorming brought me a resonating effect of being "literate". I actually edited this piece because the original was meant for a famous pop star whom I was for a time smitten. That I will admit is a moment of weakness so feel free to stone my so-called talent a mauve pulp.
RE: The Ray-Shelled Queen By: Ben C on 5/29/2003; 2:32 PM I liked your comment. :) ben
RE: The Ray-Shelled Queen By: Andrew Guerrero on 5/30/2003; 3:09 PM And title is not bad too, don't you think?
RE: The Ray-Shelled Queen By: Ben C on 5/31/2003; 6:27 PM I think the title is most excellent as well, sorry, i forgot to point that out the first time, I'm very forgetful you see. The title is one of the better titles I've seen in awhile, make sure nobody steals it from yO!
RE: The Ray-Shelled Queen By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 7/4/2003; 9:10 AM As much as the words intrigue me, I don't understand what you are saying... gomen
RE: The Ray-Shelled Queen By: R.A.B. on 7/7/2003; 8:40 AM gomen?
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