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Silence By: Stephanie on 5/19/2003; 7:50 PM Shut up! Be quiet! Leave me alone! GIVE ME SILENCE! Please! Just dont say anything. I have a headache and I need to concentrate on my work. Why do you always talk to me when I am trying to concentrate? Just leave the room, go outside and talk on the phone. Please! Just leave me alone. Im tired with stress and want to go to bed Why are grades so important to you? Just let me study. Stop talking about my grades and let me make them. Please! Just let me think. I need my space and no talking. How do you expect me to do any work if you are talking? Just get out of my face. Please! Just stop doing everything while Im studying. I have three tests tomorrow and two projects the next day. Why do you have to be my mother? I ah WAIT! Did I say that out loud? Oops! Please! Just listen to me for a second. I still need you. Why do you do everything with me? Just give me a little more space. Please! I love you.
RE: Silence By: Gene Santos on 5/20/2003; 8:52 AM woah,,,you are really stressed,steph...can i call you steph? ok...it really brought out the hidden screaming infidelities...nice work!(",)
RE: Silence By: Richard Davidson on 5/20/2003; 11:08 PM No rain No seed No dreams No silence Far away today Mama ocean hold me to you Rock me on your waves And tell me... Is it all true? That is from Heart's first album, "Dreamboat Annie." It says "lyrics by Heart," but I'm guessing it was Ann and Nancy. The song is called "Soul of the Sea," and you absolutely NEED to hear it. RUN out and buy a copy of the CD, and listen to it carefully. The angst in Ann Wilson's voice when she sings "no silence," is wonderful, and evocative of the feeling portrayed in your poem. Don't dismiss this as some useless, anonymous internet command; I'm not kidding. You NEED BADLY to hear this song. It will change your life forever. The rest of the album's pretty good, too. Why are you still here, reading this, when you could already be on your way to the record store?
RE: Silence By: Gene Santos on 5/21/2003; 11:05 AM a writer and an advertiser...(",) you're a flexible man richard... and i think i'm fallin for Stephanie's writing... it's like teenage angst at it's finest!(",)
RE: Silence By: R.A.B. on 5/21/2003; 9:11 PM hahaha! You should have seen Richard advertise bob dylan's song hehe.
RE: Silence By: Richard Davidson on 5/22/2003; 8:02 PM Actually, I'm more of a music fan than an advertiser, but It's All Right Ma (I'm Only Bleedin'.) That's the one where Dylan says, "He not busy being born is busy dying." I only mention songs that support what artists are saying. Another cool song that Stephanie may enjoy would be "Mother, mother" by Traci Bonham: "I'm hungry I'm dirty I'm losing my mind Everything's fine I'm freezing I'm starving I'm bleeding to death Everything's fine" The way she screams "Everything's fine," is too much. By the way, the Dylan song was because something cool by Chie. Does anybody remember what it was?
RE: Silence By: R.A.B. on 5/23/2003; 6:31 PM Hmmm...I think it was that poem abot phoenixes or something. Where is Chie? Haven't heard from her in ages.
RE: Silence By: Ben C on 5/24/2003; 6:37 PM radiohead changed my life, i think.
RE: Silence By: Carlo de los Santos on 5/27/2003; 9:13 AM radiohead?? the band??...screaming infedelities(dashboard confessionals)...i imagined myself as the one you are talking to and i couln't say a word at that argument...not giving a chance to talk or to explain,,,but as i finished reading it was your that mom you are talking to...great job..very striking!!!
RE: Silence By: Ben C on 5/30/2003; 5:12 PM what the hell're you talking about? my comment? or her poem? or a conflummery of the two? ?
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