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beloved By: damnthree on 2/28/2003; 5:17 AM Feelings I thought would never be bare Thoughts that in no way I considered Actions paralyze me to take A relationship I never expected would take place When the darkened skies, Brings forth sight, Of a majestic, full moon. A small spark ignited a fire A fire that burns in the depth of my soul It awakens my senses A smile reappears on my face The sparkle returns to my eye Then turned my surroundings to clear white A kiss by this girl A girl that sets the time motionless And still immovable with this reflection of reality I carry all this till I see my lady again
RE: beloved By: R.A.B. on 2/28/2003; 6:36 AM Great poem, although it needs a little work on the rhythm. Anyway the theme's great. the imageries are pretty decent too. You new around here?
RE: beloved By: damnthree on 2/28/2003; 7:03 AM yes...but not so of me in the poem....
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