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Smoke
By: Rachelle King on 12/17/2002; 12:35 AM

Dew bitten morning
beckons my presence one more time.
Crave slow burning sensation
between stumpy nubs
that finish in crooked resistance.
Melody of mariachi
cascades down face like a memory
of falling rain.
That slow feel:
Tendrils swimming in pools
of time and motion.
Suction your attention as long
as this tiny cup will hold.


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RE: Smoke
By: Richard Davidson on 12/18/2002; 10:24 PM

It sure is getting wet in here tonight! Water is such a huge part of who we are. Bruce Lee very patiently explained to me, through the miracle of television, that in order to move properly, one must flow as water; as a river. I always totally dug that, and now YOU CAN TOO!

And thank you for throwing in that kicking Mariachi band! I want to drink Tequila in the rain, and dance, dance, dance! Woo hoo!

This is all very good; very nice; very pleasant.

I think someone should write a poem about it!

Think of it: A poem about Rachelle's poem!

I wish Chie was here. I'll bet she'd do it.

And she'd probably write part of it backwards, or something!

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RE: Smoke
By: Rachelle King on 12/20/2002; 11:56 PM

HA-HA!

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