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Regret By: Daryl Del Rosario on 11/26/2002; 9:21 AM Look at me, bloody and battered Look at me, brain been splatterd Look at me, heart bleeding and broken Look at me, soul lost and forsaken Blackend and charred Scorched and burnt A boy forever scarred With his soul tattered and torn Eternity is not enough For me to forget you Mortality is not enough For me to kill you It was a great mistake Not to have killed you Yet I made the greatest When I had fallen for you
RE: Regret By: Daryl Del Rosario on 11/26/2002; 9:22 AM Sorry if my poem seemed too morbid and very vengeful. I just had to get that out of me...
RE: Regret By: Sherman Williams on 12/4/2002; 8:28 PM no problem. this is the beauty of writing
RE: Regret By: Sherman Williams on 12/4/2002; 8:29 PM
RE: Regret By: Michelle on 12/5/2002; 1:22 AM wow.. this is unreal. I was talking to a friend of mine right before I read your story. I was telling him of a man in my life that had hurt me so badly.. that i wished him dead. I said that I was more mad at myself for still talking to the jerk. I had said it would take me forever to forget him..and that I wish I had a pill to make myself stop thinking of him. Your story, poem said what I feel. I could tell you wrote it when you were both sad, and angry. Thanks for sharing it.
RE: Regret By: Mark Morgan on 12/5/2002; 1:43 AM Your story, poem said what I feel. I could tell you wrote it when you were both sad, and angry. Thanks for sharing it. For the record: posts like that are the reason Unreason exists.
You made my night, Michelle.
(Competing with Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker to do
it, to boot!)
RE: Regret By: Daryl Del Rosario on 12/7/2002; 10:18 AM But to be honest, the content of the lines were exaggerations of what I actually felt... At that time, all I wanted was to write something that would present all those feelings that were inside, and magnify them enough to show so much more... I'm glad you guys liked it...
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