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Victim By: Ryan Esin on 8/19/2002; 4:31 AM I Was nothing until you took me in And Showed me the way to the Heart I Can Feel Us Walking hand in hand But Really were just slipping Appart The Only time that It feels good is When I Go to Sleep and Pretend And now that You've Left Me I feel Im nothing Again She Says shes the Victim But Im not the one whos Walking Away She Says shes the Victim But She Didnt have to go that Way I Can See that my Days are Numberd And my Sun is Starting to Set Youve started to Stop, Shining Your Love From that Lonely Star in my Sky Here are my hands reaching Out to you Here are my hands bleeding from you There is nothing left to hold onto As You Swallow my last Breath She Says shes the Victim But Im not the one whos Walking Away She Says shes the Victim But Shes Taking in all Out on Me You are my Star You are my Soul We will be together Together we'll grow old --Please post this song that would be so cool im interested in become involved with this community, it allmost looks like a big family, i would love to be a part. Thankyou so much...Ryan
RE: Victim By: Richard Davidson on 8/19/2002; 9:08 PM Ryan: We are going to need to click the blue link to your right that says "formatting instructions." If you find the descriptions there do not have the information you need, there are several of us who can comlicate it even further, and cause your PC to explode. (Not really, any one of us can explain it in simple, concise terms) This site doesn't just take your line breaks for granted, as you were probably dismayed to see. The owners won't fix it until I give them that back rent, and on my salary, that's going to take awhile. Your song has some very "Brill Building" qualities to it. That's where Carole King and David Geffen, and others made about a million hits, writing nice simple stuff that had a swing to it. I hope it's not to a Heavy Metal melody, but that's just me; hey, I'm old, and don't buy records much anyway. I would do this song as a danceable ballad, and I'm not kidding about that, although I am kidding about the owners and the rent. Learn to format. Post here often. Have fun doing it. Send me money.
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