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Un-Ode To Modern Living Part 1

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Un-Ode To Modern Living Part 1
By: Rachelle King on 5/10/2002; 12:26 AM

I want to live in a commune
Away from abstract bills.
There’s someone else’s name on them.
My name, but it’s really someone else’s.
I would never own a cell phone
digital cable, University credit card
from that school I never got around
to attending.


I want to wear animal-friendly clothes,
even if they were made in Taiwan.
I have to buy what’s cheapest.
I have to keep buying to look presentable
at work, in social situations, to catch a mate.
I would never own a leather belt, leather-bound book,
$120 doc martin shoes with non-skid soles
clay colored and faded with care.


I want walls that all match.
No poster and picture clutter.
All the same color.
No attachment to them.
No fondness for their individuality.
I would never project such value
on pictures of Einstein
and quotes from Maya Angelou’s books.
I would never have to put them up over and over again.
I would never feel so alone
without their presence staring back at me.
No, that’s someone else.


I want one book on one loan shelf
until it is read.
I would never have half-read books
about the socialization of Mexico,
dog eared over and over again
from having to start at the beginning.


I want to not own anything
that could be put in small wooden boxes,
even if I did buy them from the thrift store
down the street.
I don't want to smother the smell of energy
left behind by the previous owner
with the suffocating scent of my sage and cigarettes.


I want to not own anything
that collects dust and cobwebs,
and attracts tiny dark bulbous beings
with hairline fracture legs
that eventually shatter my nerves into pieces
so that I have to end their presence for absolutely
no reason.


That’s someone else, not me.


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RE: Un-Ode To Modern Living Part 1
By: Mark Morgan on 5/10/2002; 12:29 PM

Before we publish this: Rachelle, will there be more parts to this?

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RE: Un-Ode To Modern Living Part 1
By: Rachelle King on 5/11/2002; 1:07 AM

Yes, eventually. You can publish them all seperately. I won't be getting around to any other additions very soon.

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RE: Un-Ode To Modern Living Part 1
By: Mark Morgan on 5/11/2002; 9:18 AM

No problem, Rachelle. I have set it up so that, in the future, readers can easily navigate between parts.

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RE: Un-Ode To Modern Living Part 1
By: Rachelle King on 5/11/2002; 2:40 PM

Hey, thanks man! I really appreciate it.

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