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to: tri-doop By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 5/7/2002; 10:42 AM the box before me beams beams the keys before me key chars the fan goes whizzz the beep goes beep as i slowly drift to sleep my fingers mumble on the board my eyelids add more to their load my hands, they ache my legs they shake as I become much less awake i sneeze, achoo, upon the glass i snot rainbows like tarnished brass i rub my eyes i grumble sighs as i instant message my good-byes now the light's a streak of white my eyes half closed, it's much too bright lol brb kewl and aiight 20 times I've said gnite and the clock clicks "thru" the "nite"
RE: to: tri-doop By: Evan on 5/8/2002; 11:20 AM Mmmmmmmmmmm, snot!!!!!!!!! I really like this poem, its amazing how you can come up with such good rhymes. It never would have occured to me that tarnished brass looks like snot on a computer monitor. Now I need to tell my mom and start waving around ummmm I can't remember what the brass thingy she had was, but it does look like snot on a keyboard. At any rate I can start waving it around and saying the word snot over and over and over and over and over and over.......
RE: to: tri-doop By: Richard Davidson on 5/9/2002; 6:41 PM Chie, you'd be the best writer on the site if I didn't come here!
RE: to: tri-doop By: Mark Morgan on 5/9/2002; 11:16 PM ..and if I spent more time writing and less time managing the place...
RE: to: tri-doop By: Rachelle King on 5/10/2002; 1:06 AM yeah Mark, Haven't read anything from you in awhile.
RE: to: tri-doop By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 5/11/2002; 7:05 AM *plots assassinations*
RE: to: tri-doop By: Vlad Vostok on 9/11/2003; 8:27 AM that almost made me stop masturbating - ALMOST
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