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It could be worse By: lindsay on 5/22/2002; 4:59 PM What if I swim in a pool of chlorine And then, the next day, my hair has turned green? What if I drop my pen in the sink And then, when I write, it runs out of ink? What if I make a big fool of myself And then my crush puts me on the shelf? What if, one day, the computer has crashed And now everything I did is trashed?
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 3/30/2002; 5:03 PM First and foremost, there is nothing wrong with green hair. I like green hair. You're right about how it could be worse, you're not at taco bell!
RE: It could be worse By: Mark Morgan on 3/30/2002; 8:50 PM I like the sentiment. I've noticed a lot of the poetry around these parts is teenagers struggling to gain some perspective on their lives.
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 3/31/2002; 12:45 AM Hey mark, no offense, but you can completely destroy the whole feeling of a conversation by making statements and analysisises of it. Besides, I am a teenager and I have plenty of perspective on my life. (Dammit where are my cheez-its? Yes jimmy, i'll go out with her. Hey sister, am I going out with anyone right now? Oh yeah, almost forgot about her. Sorry jimmy, I forgot I already had a girlfriend.) What was I saying now? Oh yeah, I have plenty of perspective on my life.
RE: It could be worse By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 3/31/2002; 2:32 AM me teenager
RE: It could be worse By: ScottN on 3/31/2002; 6:46 PM You know Adam, some people just *MIGHT* have something worthwhile to say...
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 4/1/2002; 1:12 AM congratulations scott, but what is your point, I wasn't stopping anything worthwhile from being said.
RE: It could be worse By: ScottN on 4/1/2002; 11:29 AM Maybe Mark was trying to contribute to the conversation? I'm glad you have plenty of perspective on your life. Maybe the other teen posters here don't have full perspective, and are trying to explore their limits. Mark was just commenting on that (without being judgemental in any way), and you didn't have to come down on him like that.
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 4/1/2002; 2:24 PM I see what you're saying ScottN, I didn't mean to rain out mark's parade. When I rain I pour. At that time, after reading that poem and all, to me it didn't seem to fit in. It's like getting done with an adavnced calculus lecture when someone from the back shouts "What's a variable?". And when he posted that, to me it sounded like he was disobeying the big third person rule. What is the big third person rule? It's a rule that says it's not nice to talk about someone in third person when they are present. It never feels quite right when someone is discussing or commenting about you and refers to you as a third person when you can read it yourself. Do you get what I'm saying?
RE: It could be worse By: vanessa on 4/1/2002; 9:53 PM yeah, i could be worse
RE: It could be worse By: ScottN on 4/1/2002; 10:04 PM Quoth Vanessa: yeah, i could be worse Oh, I don't know, I like you just the way you are :-)
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 4/1/2002; 11:56 PM
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 4/1/2002; 11:53 PM
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 4/1/2002; 11:59 PM Sorry bout the blank spaces, it's april fools and my sister was posting messages in my name.
RE: It could be worse By: lindsay on 4/2/2002; 9:25 PM i haven't been on in three or four days now and i was writing this because of my life right now. sometimes i think my life is the pits, but then i see something and realize that things could be worse. i decided to put it in words, and as i said before, it's still in rough draft. it might change.
RE: It could be worse By: Adam Schirmacher on 4/2/2002; 11:54 PM I like this poem, and it reminds me of the band "green jelly".
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