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Pets
By: Jody on 2/26/2002; 10:07 AM

I HAD A CAT
I HEARD IT GO SPLAT
AS I THREW IT AGAINST THE WALL
I TORE BACK ITS HIDE
ITS INTESTINES I TIED
AND BOUNCED AROUND LIKE A BALL

I HAD A FISH
I HEARD IT GO SQUISH
AS I SQUEEZED IT WITH ALL OF MY MIGHT
IT JUST SWAM ROUND ITS TANK
ITS EXPRESSION SO BLANK
BUT ITS EYES POPPING OUT WERE A SIGHT

MY DOG WAS CALLED ROVER
I SAW HIM KEEL OVER
HE WAS SHOT WITH A GUN IN THE HEAD
I WAS WADING IN DROOL
WHEN I FLIPPED, LOST MY COOL
BUT HE CERTAINLY DOESNT DRIBBLE NOW HES DEAD

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Re: Pets
By: Seth Dillingham on 2/26/2002; 10:28 AM

That had the desired effect: disturbing and rather revolting.

Nice rhyming, though. ;-)


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RE: Pets
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 2/28/2002; 9:29 AM

wow... i never squished a fish before...

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RE: Pets
By: lindsay on 2/28/2002; 7:46 PM

yeah   that was disturbing.
very interesting though.  


lindsay


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RE: Pets
By: vanessa on 3/3/2002; 1:22 AM

it was ok until u got to the dog part....then i just got sad and revolting!!! nice job rhyming though, i couldn't rhyme if my life depended on it...no joke! hehe! lata

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RE: Pets
By: lindsay on 3/4/2002; 9:52 PM

i was sad from the begining with the cat but that's just me.

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RE: Pets
By: vanessa on 3/7/2002; 9:23 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! :)>

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RE: Pets
By: lindsay on 3/9/2002; 6:27 PM

why do you do that? Why do you laugh at me?

huh?

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RE: Pets
By: vanessa on 3/9/2002; 6:32 PM

wouldn't u like to know!!! haha, no j/k. i laughed at you cause you're a cat lover and i just felt like laughing, is it a sin for someone to laugh, huh, huh??? thats right....i didn't think so!

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RE: Pets
By: lindsay on 3/13/2002; 7:04 PM

i'm sorry but it is a sin to laugh AT someone without telling them why :Þ so THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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