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RAIN By: Zares Kurtoga on 2/12/2002; 3:55 PM I'm too strong for the song (Just an illusion) Looking beyond the rubble that lay Is that what I said Memories letting me down again Taking a trip down memory lane Wishing to exterminate the pain With my habits of sin, Again, I fall prey to the chemical reactions In my brain Tap Tap Tap Rain On the windowpane driving me insane I am just a haggard face Out in the open Come ,take me in Entertain me and you will see Elevate the feelings of Chemicals in my body
Re: RAIN By: Matthew Patterson on 2/12/2002; 4:58 PM The song's good, seems like it's going somewhere... and then it just stops. With appropriate instrumentation, of course, it could sound just great, but from just a lyrical perspective it seems to end quite abruptly.
RE: RAIN By: Zares Kurtoga on 2/13/2002; 4:32 PM Matthew, This thing had for stanzas and I cut and pasted them all, but they are not showing up I don't understand...Well, thanks anyway, Kaj
RE: RAIN By: Sarah on 2/13/2002; 6:33 PM freak....fix it now slave! hey man read my 'i dunt remember..." thing - it needs fixing so u fix it now!!! hahaha
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