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Before Today
By: Dorothy Marie on 2/28/2002; 4:16 PM


Before today
I never stopped to feel
the balls of water
bouncing on my hair each morning
when I turned on the river
and let loose this fountain
I never thought this was-
rain from some mountain.

So I opened my eyes
and for the first time
in my life
I watched the warped spheres
float down from my eyelids
lost people
sprawled in the air
hurled from some bridge somewhere.

And I never realized
what gravity was
until I watched those little spheres fall
such great speed
from my eyes
I never blinked and in a second
their lives were all gone
their lives were all gone.

Before this morning
I never stopped to think
as I lay in my bed
hand on my stomach
hand on my pillow
what, is this reality?
I had forgotten my body-
but I desired not to find it.

So I closed my eyes
and forgot my arms
left alone with only my mind
I realized this reality was all relative
because I could not tell
where my dreams ended
was my day pretended?
Do I really need glasses at all?

And I never realized
how a slave lived
until I looked in the mirror
through slow melting glasses
such slow speed
before my eyes
for I am a slave to society's plastic.

So throw away the eyes!
Throw away the magazines!
Throw away your life
and live in your dreams.
There really is no difference
in what you see
it is in your mind.
Lay in bed,
become blind,
forget time.

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RE: Before Today
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 2/5/2002; 7:09 AM

Oh gee. don't tempt me to lie in bed all day...

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RE: Before Today
By: Evan on 2/5/2002; 3:53 PM

Hoo boy this is the sort of poetry I REALLY like because it shows the interaction between the world of the mind and the physical (the term "real world" is a complete misnomer because who is to say which world has a greater value)world. The physical world when tempered with one's imagination is a wonderous place as is the world of one's mind once it sucks in the sensory inputes from the physical world.

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RE: Before Today
By: Dorothy Marie on 2/7/2002; 6:57 PM

Hehe. I'll temp you all I like, Chie!!! muhahaha! ...

Anyway, thanks Evan. :) This was written on one of THOSE days. You know, THOSE days? Those days when you just had this great, realistic dream and when you wake up, it doesn't feel like you've woken at all? Anywho, it's easier for me to make a dream real than to make reality a dream. =)P

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RE: Before Today
By: Evan on 2/8/2002; 12:05 AM

ooh yes I love those types of dreams, the ones that make you forget what the reality really is even after you've woken up. I'm very good at letting my dreams intrude into reality, all I have to do is let my imagination get carried away and dreams can be a whole lot of fun, especially if you've developed the ability to recognize when you are dreaming and then you can manipulate the world within your mind. Its a lot of fun. Of course everybody has the interaction between dreaming and reality. Many may not realize it but it seems to me that one's dreams are quite probably at the root of creative thought.

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