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the jewel that was the sea
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 12/25/2001; 3:55 AM

liquified cloud of murky dark haunts my view
migraine of the silence grates upon my mind
strangled by pressure, yet I still follow you
On the sea floor who knows just what we will find?

riding upon my storm-tossed ship
i for ballast, made you my mast
But you by heavy force broke
and into the water we were cast


and now you sink me down to depths unknown
searching for the colored blossoms on the floor


submarine submarine flowers
beautiful dreams
you lost them and you want them back


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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: Dorothy Marie on 12/27/2001; 5:34 PM

If envy is a sin, I'm going to have to stop reading your poetry, chI. :) It's amazing stuff, it is. In so few words you give such a vivid picture... I'm afraid between sleep and work, my honey words have slipped from my grasp. I just don't have anything to say. :)P hehe, but we'll see. Until I regain my thoughts, I'll just read yours!

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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 12/30/2001; 7:02 AM

*cough cough*

*blink*

*rubs eyes*

Dot??? envy??? ME?!

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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: vanessa on 12/31/2001; 11:53 PM

hey chie! i don't really know you, well actually, let me rephrase that, i've never met you but i have heard lots about you. i really like your writing, its soooo vivid! i wish i could write like that! its so good!

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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 1/1/2002; 2:13 AM

hey vanessa... I'm the person who recruited ya. (: I gave ya this huge stack of paper all about rotc....

remember??

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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: vanessa on 1/1/2002; 4:27 PM

just as a note before you think that i'm insane, i have a very selective memory meaning i dont remeber things that didn't happen within the last 5 min, and i also forget many important things that other people remember, like tests, people, names and such.
so, *smiling and nodding to be polite*. in answer to your question, to be honest, no, i don't remember you, or much of anything that happened last year, except MO ranch and lindsay running into a wall/door! that's about all i remember, srry. i feel really bad that i don't remember. maybe it will come to me in a dream or something where i saw you and what you look like and any other details that i forgot about last year and ROTC and anything, (srry if none of this makes much sense, i don't usually make much sense when i talk/type/dream/write) n e way! ttfn!

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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: Evan on 1/1/2002; 9:36 PM

Too late I already think you're insane! Of course I think everybody is. As for your memory thing, I get that too. I've had two people I haven't seen in about 13 years walk up to me and say "Hi, Evan!". I guess running around with a chicken or a pair of underwear on your head leaves a strong impression, but that doesn't explain those people since everybody was as weird as me in first grade.

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RE: the jewel that was the sea
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 1/2/2002; 8:33 AM

hey no problem.

its no killer thing. but anyways... yah.

everyone makes fun of me because i remember everything (that i dont need to)(when you get better).

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