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By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 10/21/2001; 3:15 PM


                     they stand guard
                over the graves of the dead
                         silently



                       hot tendrils
               dance their ritual with grace
                        in the wind



                       smoky blooms
               ghost-like wreath the monument
                         pyre-fed

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RE: funeral
By: Dorothy Marie on 9/15/2001; 11:08 AM

Wow... short, but it expresses so very much... LIKE YOU! Short people are great. I love this poem, chI. It has a swirling, glistening, dream-like state to it... but so much reality in its message. I like it very very much.

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RE: funeral
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 9/18/2001; 12:01 AM

hey!

thanks!!

you know what's funny? I meant this to be a haiku in 5-7-5 form, but somewhere along the circuts in my brain it got cut to 3-7-3... how odd.

:-p hehe *short*

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