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Waterlight By: Dorothy Marie on 10/21/2001; 4:40 PM *Back to my traditional poetry* You are the only one who waits for me until I'm done You look through my eyes through my soul like it's stained glass You are my light you see through me in all disguises Tell me to be myself because the light can always tell You are still here when no one else wants to stay -you're my no one- You say you're me looking out into yourself that's why it's so easy I am their laundry washed and hung out to dry when it's raining at night Then you come and shine your light right through me transparent sheets, hanging on drops of rain droplets of rain you've never seen me cry. Lighthouse shine to me your light spinning round for me waiting always waiting If my seas are rought or calm you offer up your shore to crash upon if I like
RE: Waterlight By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 7/25/2001; 1:22 AM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RE: Waterlight By: Dorothy Marie on 7/25/2001; 1:25 AM YOU GOT IT PERFECTLY! That is EXACTLY it!
RE: Waterlight By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 7/25/2001; 1:41 AM weIRd! wOW COOOL!!! *hug*
RE: Waterlight By: Ginny Davis on 9/8/2001; 3:00 PM Hey Dot! Great poem. I like all the extended metaphors. Vey cool =)
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