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Charon By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 10/22/2001; 12:35 PM *An experiment* My love lies in the sweet tall grass her hair adorned with flowers wild like the deep pools of her eyes stormy and calm as days pass her lips speak words cool like water trickling slowly from a mountain spring her smile is sunrise of delight the kiss of the eve's daughter Where do you go, my love? -I go to my destiny What is that, my love? -To be wed to the night. Why do you leave me, my love? -You are poor and I cannot love you. My love, do not abandon me! -Your love is rank and tedious to me. But the King of night is cold. He has no love in his eye though his words pour out sweet honeyed music. -The king of the night has offered me riches My love is greater than the King's. -You do not give an opal the size of my face and I do not care for your love. -To him I go. her lashes are dusted with the finest dew closed against her cheek and her hands clutch the last bloom which slowly loses its rosy hue
RE: Charon By: Evan on 4/3/2001; 11:47 AM This was a very good poem and actually reminds me of some poems that I read last year in Mrs. Oulton's class. Did you attempt to write your poem in the style of a specific poet?
RE: Charon By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 4/4/2001; 12:05 AM no... i just wrote it... i think it is the influence of reading chaucer while i had flu... that had my spouting verse every which way. that and robin hood. hrum. *shruggle* I just wanted to write something more... different than what i usually do ya know?!
RE: Charon By: Dorothy Marie on 4/25/2001; 12:11 PM wow, chie, i just read this. it is great! i've been a bad girl and haven't been keeping up with my reading, but i'm catching up now, and this is just WONDERFUL! Chaucer is great for your creativity, then.
RE: Charon By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 4/25/2001; 10:11 PM BABA HAGA that i do doubt i want to cut that middle section ouT! and make it rhyme and flow and sound less modish modish? no modern... its just like sayinf "peeps" in a love song it JUST CLASHES!
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