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breAk Down By: Dorothy Marie on 10/22/2001; 1:50 PM A stone wall High and Sturdy Unsupported laughed at stones thrown at Clothed with Graffiti Other people's ideas Cemented with emotions Rigid emotions proper emotions Decaying emotions Thinking it would feel good to fall down Allowing Real emotions Warm Acid emotions to eat through Thinking it would feel good to collapse Allowing itself to break down on the sidewalk the Sturdy Trampled Sidewalk
RE: breAk Down By: PJ Caroon on 3/2/2001; 2:29 PM Dorothy has a shiny purple shirt made out of HUMAN FLESH! O_o -PJ
RE: breAk Down By: Dorothy Marie on 3/2/2001; 11:21 PM It's periwinkle.
RE: breAk Down By: PJ Caroon on 3/2/2001; 11:32 PM Ah... so it is... And very soft too, for human flesh. My apologies. To guys, purple (periwinkle), is purple. :P
RE: breAk Down By: Dorothy Marie on 3/2/2001; 11:38 PM so are we speaking through voices, now? if we are, we must speak in code moogie ooogie lulu spoooty puut. gaaaaaaaaaaaaalen. dillo.
RE: breAk Down By: Evan on 4/7/2001; 1:51 PM Yay! Another good poem for me to read. I really liked this one. It seems to be metaphor for the constraints that society places upon us (I don't see what's wrong with leaving a pencil in my nose!)but of course the reader often gets an impression different from what the writer intends. My English teachers keep reading way too much into my stories and finding hidden meaning where none was intended, but the what the reader thinks it is is often more important to the reader than what the author thinks. Arghh I'm rambling. Everything I think makes me think of something else and I start kind of rambling and then I forget what I was talking about.........................Uhh anyway good uhhh Poem Dorothy.
RE: breAk Down By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 4/16/2001; 1:22 PM what the reader sees in the writing is a reflection of his/her own worries and problems. Which is imporatnt because it creates a feeling of empathy etc. this also means that if a teacher reads a lot into it... hehe and if they dont like it, theyve probably never seen whatever it was in that light. writing is the mirror by which we shine light on others.
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