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Metaphysical Crutch By: Dorothy Marie on 10/22/2001; 8:24 PM Two eyes- one glares down upon itself relentlessly analyzing and exposing all emotions and desires that whet its lust for a sinful humanity. Two eyes- one shields itself relentlessly from the heated passion the other sees becoming enveloped in its cold innocence. What apocolypse will befall those lustfull creatures- boiling in their own red blood- befall those sheltered beings- frigid in their darkly specled stones- when their eyes become blind. A third eye- the blind visionary that sees all lust and innocence as it exists in the consummate perfection of the circular motion that is life.
RE: Metaphysical Crutch By: Sam Marston on 1/19/2001; 11:41 PM Dorothy, thats creepy close... Im not sure what you meant it to mean... But when I read your words... I have hard times dealing with your poem... my feelings for the last three years put in a few simle verses.. everything, all encompassingly.... I cant take a reflection like that
RE: Metaphysical Crutch By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 1/22/2001; 8:30 PM Hey do-t do you notice your poetry often resolves to a circular/life pattern eastern style theme?? weird man. I'm the japanese one here ;) anyway, that's like a pure dose of concertrated thought in a single espresso injection. IV! Please don't lose that butt! "A sense of humor doesn't mean the ability to tell jokes or make wisecracks. It's a sense of proportion and the courage to smile. It's the ability to take yourself and your problems with a grain of salt, the ability to smile at yourself and the world as well." - John Luther
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