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Carrying you
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 10/21/2001; 6:31 PM

the grey mists silkily shroud you in a parody of chaos
I would hold you close to me.
eyes burn, baptised in the ocean waters of pain
I would seal each one away in a bottle.
feet lose their way, trapped once more in the quagmire of worry
I would give you wings to fly.
you stumble upon the jagged stones which you cast long ago
I would be your path.
when demons slash your soul with punishments long deserved
I would die for you.
As the waves crush you against all hope
I would be your beacon.
When you fall from emotional cliffs of despair
I would catch you.

I would carry you...
I would love you.

Would you let me?


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RE: Carrying you
By: Dorothy Marie Koveal on 10/15/2000; 11:20 PM

i really like this, chee. i REALLY like this. i know how you feel... well, i know why you feel... i cannot say that i have ever felt that much before, though. i just want you to know that when ***(juliette whiskey?) won't let you, and you feel like falling from emotional cliffs of dispair, we will ALL be there for you.

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RE: Carrying you
By: Mark Morgan on 10/15/2000; 11:33 PM

I thought I'd replied to this, but apparently not. I know exactly how you feel, too. I just went through a breakup, and I understand the feelings behind such poems as this.

Made me cry.

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RE: Carrying you
By: Dorothy Marie Koveal on 11/12/2000; 3:16 AM

i was just rereading this... chI, it is most true right now. hey, could you resend me that conversation, by the bye. i wish i could write like this!

everyone else: yes, i am typing in normal words.

ecki.

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RE: Carrying you
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 11/12/2000; 4:58 PM

I'm flattered... although i wish i didnt have to feel that way (?)... I believe in miracles! Which convo DOOT? I wish i couldst write like you. You grey green brown thing. and Juliette Echo needs to grow up a lot and realize that he cant catch himself when he falls off a cliff he jumped off of. *shrug* Where did you come from angel? How did you know I needed you? Yesterday I was one of the lonely people... Hope mark is having a good vact! Wow, im speaking english too, not gobbledegook. i think i need to catch the soul poetry train again. until i finish this paper, tata! chI

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RE: Carrying you
By: Matthew Patterson, the Paranoid Minister on 8/25/2001; 12:02 AM

Just thought I'd point out that this and "Shimmer" were published in the 2001 edition of the Troubador, our school's literary magazine. Exquisite, they are.

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RE: Carrying you
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 9/14/2001; 12:29 AM

Both??

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RE: Carrying you
By: Matthew Patterson on 9/14/2001; 7:55 AM

Ayup. You want a copy?


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RE: Carrying you
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 12/25/2001; 5:12 AM

*still wanteth a copy*

will you be in town in June? I shall be visiting Lous. for meg's wedding

Hey can everyone from Epis/rotc/buddies i know tell me if they'll be in town?

I want to party!

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RE: Carrying you
By: Evan on 12/25/2001; 3:02 PM

I'll probably be in town, well actually not in town as I'll probably be in Plaquemine in June but I will be in the general vicinity. A party sounds fun, I can show everybody the wide variety of noises that can be made using only your mouth and a plastic cup (well actually one's vocal cords and some form of gas must be involved as well).

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