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Absence
By: Sean McMains on 4/23/2004; 6:15 PM

I don't think this is finished, but it's a second draft, and I'd welcome feedback:

I have a painting on my wall of a flaming bush. 
Its leaves and branches sear the eye, 
painted with the brightest titanium hues
in the artist's palette. 
A man stands nearby, shoes off,
a stricken look upon his worn face.
He has eyes for nothing but this smoldering shrub 
which has sundered his life
of muted green and brown and rust.


On an aimless walk through my neighborhood, I keep an eye on the foliage I pass, on the off chance that it should suddenly erupt into lucid light and give my walk direction. Or perhaps a column of cloud will precede me or a post-rain puddle part as I promenade around the suburbs, hoping for transcendence, but ultimately having to be content with just a bit of exercise.

Later I sit and stare at the painting again, and I will the bush to be something more than brushstrokes and globs of paint, to burst the two dimensional bonds of the canvas, and to manifest there in my living room, igniting the carpet and maybe some furniture, and thoroughly frightening the cat. But a painting it stubbornly remains, even though I double and triple-check long after the kids have all gone to bed.


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