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Prelude By: Dorothy Marie on 8/5/2003; 12:43 PM Silver kisses blackened night Above waves crashing, foaming white. Billowing clouds of softened gray: Blankets to tuck the stars away. And sweet sleep floating on a gentle wind, Caress this long forgotten skin. Oh nightly orchestra, play away To all who listen with minds astray: A prelude to love and the newcoming day.
RE: Prelude By: Gene Santos on 8/6/2003; 8:20 AM wow...(",)
RE: Prelude By: Dorothy Marie on 8/7/2003; 11:34 AM It felt good to write that one. ^_^
RE: Prelude By: Ben C on 8/7/2003; 1:59 PM I could hear the frogs ribbiting their mating calls from the evening swamp between your lines in this one... excellent analogies, good food for thought.
RE: Prelude By: Dorothy Marie on 8/7/2003; 11:28 PM Ah! So you caught the analogies between the scenery and the love that takes place between two people. ^_^
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