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Sunsets By: Andrew Paul McEwen on 10/21/2001; 6:32 PM I sit there and just stare at a few pretty colors I sit because I know that it is a safe spot to sit and I know that I must get to a safe location soon if I am running outside It could be an inherited trait to allow the mind to recognize that it will soon be night and that you need to get to a safe location soon I sit out in the rain and watch on my patio, watch the rain hit the green leaves Watch the drops go down into the soil of what needs it to live I see the ants carrying on their life while all this happens Birds flying to their young with a fresh meal All of this while I sit there and watch The fighting for life that is the ripples of my pool as the rain gives each atom life I then look out further upon the golf course This man made thing That creates the border of nature
RE: Sunsets By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 9/10/2000; 4:09 PM ANDREW! Grr, your poems are so annoyingly unromantic, hehe. Chie loves love poems haha. Golf courses and pencils... what's next, toothpaste? actually i dont think that would be too bad hehe. Well, Im rather lacking in the complete poietry ideas, so I am writing a memoir-fiction and a song. maybe if i ever finish it dot could sing it with me (?please?) i dunno if it will ever get done though. I keep forgetting the lyrics before i write them down. it is about forgotten goodbyes, which is.. oh well. I hope i do finish it though. bbye chie ps andrew you know i like your poetry, im just picking hhe :)
RE: Sunsets By: Dorothy Marie Koveal on 9/10/2000; 5:24 PM I liked this one better than SOLO, about PENCILS! pencils... right... well, at least this one gives us all a peek into YOU, not a pencil. Unless, you are a pencil. But, on another note, CHIE: I will. Okay? KEep up the writing people!
RE: Sunsets By: jim heiney on 4/30/2002; 12:43 AM The sunset tonight,were you there? I had been before.I need a special place to watch from.Do you remember were the sunset tonight.
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