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2d-am
By: damnthree on 3/17/2003; 3:07 PM

A walking unwrap gash
in ecstasy's shadowed.

From a firefly to a star.

A thought in every hallucination
your own resemblance
in dimness would emerge.
StrikingÂ…'till i get stuck-up!

Shattered with your words...
Words un-erased in my ear.

Vibrating---

And now...
here i am left
with my questionsÂ…
i bound to seek...


Why did you left me hanging Amie???
Why---

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RE: 2d-am
By: damnthree on 3/17/2003; 9:39 AM

Ei..can you help me with this problem???
Post some feedbacks...

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RE: 2d-am
By: Daryl Del Rosario on 3/17/2003; 10:16 AM

Who's Amie? What did you mean by left hanging?

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RE: 2d-am
By: damnthree on 3/17/2003; 3:10 PM

A friend that i really like so much...she left me hanging into my questions that,why she just suddenly told me not to have any kind of communication with her? it was just like lettin you stay in the middle of the woods and start asking why did she left you(hanging) holding on to something and she would just pop and leave you all alone....i hate this feeling!!!but behind this...i still like her...or maybe love her...but i don't want to be pathetic! maybe some how but not that much...right??

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RE: 2d-am
By: Andrew Guerrero on 3/17/2003; 7:25 PM

There's nothing wrong with being pathetic. The fact that you think that what you're thinking is pathetic is well pathetic.

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RE: 2d-am
By: Carlo de los Santos on 3/17/2003; 11:59 PM

Ei...what's up??? it's me damnthree...
sarap kasi lokohin si R.A.B...=)

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RE: 2d-am
By: R.A.B. on 3/19/2003; 2:24 AM

Hehehe got me there.

Carlo you're still pathetic and a hopeless romantic, when will you change?

Anyway great poem.

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RE: 2d-am
By: Carlo de los Santos on 3/21/2003; 11:40 PM

Ei...your comment and suggestions...any questions 'bout this poem??
...ummm talk about change??i don't like changes in the first place... at least i'm romantic!!! = but im pretty sure that would change if i found my princess(heheh...anthony)
but...her name was (Princess Amie!!! darn it!!!) and maybe soon...she would break my heart...ahhhhhhh.....it's never ending!!!!!

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RE: 2d-am
By: R.A.B. on 3/21/2003; 7:30 AM

Don't use Filipino language Carlo, it's rude to talk in a group in a language that your other group members don't understand.

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RE: 2d-am
By: Carlo de los Santos on 3/21/2003; 11:41 PM

Ya...i have already edited it... =)

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RE: 2d-am
By: Daryl Del Rosario on 3/26/2003; 8:02 AM

You also did that too RAB

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RE: 2d-am
By: Carlo de los Santos on 3/27/2003; 12:33 AM

What's up Da? i'll be getting my class cards on april 7...no 5 plssss....

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RE: 2d-am
By: Daryl Del Rosario on 3/26/2003; 10:36 AM

Okay, I'll see you there 7. Nothing higher than 2.5 please!!!!!!!!!!

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