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Remnants By: Rachelle King on 3/25/2002; 11:12 PM He used to tell me I spoke of humanity with “a tongue like [ancient] flower petals.” I never completely understood what he meant by word engulfed in meaningless brackets sometimes used by young poets to create emphasis. Three years later, studying this illusion observing the permanent residence of black rings around my eyes, realization shattered oblivious image gazing in disbelief. Fists clenched rusted dewdrops and glistening tangles of distorted reflection. Elder blossom wept for her lost vitality, for a wilted petal aged from the weathering of an arid world, for gained wisdom [often unwanted] of human deficiency.
RE: Remnants By: Adam Schirmacher on 3/26/2002; 12:22 AM I don't get it, but I like the term "human deficiency".
RE: Remnants By: Rachelle King on 3/28/2002; 4:51 PM Thanx fer that!
RE: Remnants By: Adam Schirmacher on 3/28/2002; 7:38 PM Anytime
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