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911
By: Dorothy Marie on 10/21/2001; 4:15 PM


Swirls of the Great Master's Masterpiece
Carried on the terrified blasts of the
fleeing, the screaming,
Torn Away by the horrific backdraft.

Trapped in their House of Cards,
Collapsed by the pointing of an
inhuman finger,
Wrought in Hatred and Evil.

Raping this Sanctity of Life,
Rejoicing in the blood-splattered
streets thousands of miles away,
They are bereft of their Meeting.

Hundreds of Heores. Lost
Amid the Heat and Twisted Metal
of unconstituted war
For the Rescue of Joy.

Not a Dream, though too
Horrible to be other than an abrupt
awakening in a
Nightmarish sweat of helplessness.

Do not let this day pass unasnwered.
Let not their names, these martyres,
be forgotten,
Lest we should sanction Hell on Earth
and Feed our Freedom to its Flames.

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Re: 911
By: Mark Morgan on 9/13/2001; 1:51 AM

Thank you, Dot. I've been two days speechless.

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RE: 911
By: Marie Tard on 2/3/2002; 3:01 PM

Good...other than the random capitolization of words. I liked it, I really did.

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RE: 911
By: vanessa on 2/3/2002; 5:06 PM

really really like this, i know you wrote it a while back, but i hadn't read it yet, it really is vivid and intense. i really like it!

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RE: 911
By: Zares Kurtoga on 2/5/2002; 6:06 PM

JACK DANIELS THAT"S ALL I CAN SAY

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RE: 911
By: Dorothy Marie on 2/7/2002; 6:53 PM

In response to Marie Tard: the words aren't randomly capitalized. There's a meaning to it if you take the time to think about it.

Thanks 'nessa. =)

and, Jack Daniels = what?

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