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skinished
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 10/21/2001; 5:25 PM

Perhaps this layer has grown on me
rooted in so solidly
this old past from which I turn
the epidermis which I burn


cracked open fortune tasted sweet
much too tempting not to eat
but when bitter was the flavour
too pungeant were the crumbs to savour


self-flattery you did employ
considerate enough to destroy,
trying so hard not to hurt
feelings you had done naught to divert


Is this about how you hurt me?
truly not, as you should see
but about the trees dead in your wake
lives you weren't afraid to take


She cared for you and so did she
you left them all so selfishly
never giving them a second glance
all in the name of young romance


And because you cannot read my mind
you know not what lies behind
keep losing it, like a steam roller
coaster, without a controller.

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RE: skinished
By: Evan on 5/21/2001; 10:04 PM

Onions!!!!!!!

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RE: skinished
By: Dorothy Marie on 5/21/2001; 10:09 PM

What does skinished mean?

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RE: skinished
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 5/22/2001; 12:38 AM

skinned + finished = skinished

i wasnt supposed to tell you ;)

do you understand it?

i need someone to understand what i mean to say with my eyes.

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RE: skinished
By: Dorothy Marie on 5/22/2001; 5:52 PM

That is what I thought it meant, but I wasn't sure. Yes, I understand it...

Boy + Girl1... Boy - Girl1... Boy + Girl2... Boy = strange and mixed up guy...

That equation has nothing to do with the poem itself, just with the involved characters. :)

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RE: skinished
By: Chie Theresa Fujioka on 5/23/2001; 9:55 PM

hmm i wonder who...

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